Whose beholding who?

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Of moments what can be said?
Be prepared.
Calibrate your eye,
so beauty may capture you.
This, is when you are truly you.

Atul Ranchod

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4 thoughts on “Whose beholding who?

  1. Hi, Atul,

    I have been reading your beautiful poetry and I know that it is usually considered inacceptable, to suggest something, but I have a suggestion to make your poetry even more attractive. If you are interested, I will sugget something with an example and the reason why.

    Best wishes,

    Alain

    On Mon, Apr 27, 2015 at 10:31 AM, topofthewater wrote:

    > atul723 posted: ” Of moments what can be said? Be prepared. Calibrate > your eye, so beauty may capture you. This, is when you are truly you. Atul > Ranchod”

    Like

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